Which one is better? And is there points im missin..

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Which one is better? And is there points im missing for a public mission statement?
1. "Our mission at Rogg Nation is to support individuals in cultivating mental health, meaningful relationships, gratitude, and an organized approach to life. We guide members to outgrow unhealthy patterns, embrace gratitude in daily living, discover purpose, and become their best selves."
2.Rogg Nation helps individuals grow, build meaningful relationships, nurture mental health, and live with purpose, organization, and gratitude—outgrowing fear and embracing their best selves